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| author | Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz> | 2022-01-25 10:49:51 +0900 |
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| committer | Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz> | 2022-01-25 10:49:51 +0900 |
| commit | 11cd377f53bf0a70518668936eef1ccce63381c7 (patch) | |
| tree | 54f8f0bed5d41fef63c6088f0c91ca32b4dde6ea | |
| parent | 9af6d4b5a588fc115bc4915b8920b82f724387d1 (diff) | |
doc: Fix some grammar
This is an extraction of the user-visible changes done in 410aa24,
including all the relevant documentation parts.
Author: Justin Pryzby
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220124030001.GQ23027@telsasoft.com
Backpatch-through: 10
| -rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml | 7 |
2 files changed, 4 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml index f9936eac010..a51822b5d55 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml @@ -1809,7 +1809,7 @@ The commands accepted in walsender mode are: streaming starts on timeline <replaceable class="parameter">tli</>; otherwise, the server's current timeline is selected. The server can reply with an error, for example if the requested section of WAL has already - been recycled. On success, server responds with a CopyBothResponse + been recycled. On success, the server responds with a CopyBothResponse message, and then starts to stream WAL to the frontend. </para> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml index fd4e117de34..6e6787d8b50 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml @@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <listitem> <para> First, scan the directory where the WAL segment files are written and - find the newest completed segment file, using as starting point the - beginning of the next WAL segment file. This is calculated independently - on the compression method used to compress each segment. + find the newest completed segment file, using as the starting point the + beginning of the next WAL segment file. </para> </listitem> @@ -93,7 +92,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <para> If a starting point cannot be calculated with the previous method, the latest WAL flush location is used as reported by the server from - a <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command. + an <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command. </para> </listitem> </orderedlist> |