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authorBruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>2015-06-11 11:11:43 -0400
committerBruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>2015-06-11 11:11:43 -0400
commitbab74070b325704f7b7a86c4bd72f9a6b3318ed7 (patch)
treee99c48d0dc0e7aa247e032aeafdc20689ed2a32f /doc/src
parent1cc9f8ccd9b7406c52fb85e48435cb6d265d006e (diff)
release notes: implement suggestions
Report by Michael Paquier
Diffstat (limited to 'doc/src')
-rw-r--r--doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml12
1 files changed, 7 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
index c4bc3163f1f..d4817acdee7 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.5.sgml
@@ -1501,8 +1501,8 @@
<para>
The remote snapshot must have been exported by
- <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined as a
- logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel
+ <function>pg_export_snapshot()</> or been defined when creating
+ a logical replication slot. This can be used by parallel
<application>pg_dump</> to use a consistent snapshot across
<application>pg_dump</> processes.
</para>
@@ -1617,8 +1617,8 @@
</para>
<para>
- This allows external tools to more easily process <acronym>WAL</>
- files.
+ This allows external tools to more easily track what blocks
+ are modified.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1754,7 +1754,9 @@
<listitem>
<para>
- Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries (Noah Misch)
+ Add icons to all <productname>MSVC</>-built binaries and version
+ information to all <systemitem class="osname">MS Windows</>
+ binaries (Noah Misch)
</para>
<para>